Here's the song so far: www.speedyshare.com/458222594.html

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The bass sounds very fat in my speakers, but yeah, with even bigger speakers in a club or something, i wouldn't be suprised if it sounded like crap. :)
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well it's not only the size of the speakers...
it's also the natural reverb of the space... like inside clubs where the bass will bounce back and forth against the walls and so music that has reverby low freqs like those previous two songs (your latest track is fine, btw)... will just be drowning in bass.

do you have monitors?

now this new track of yours ...the low freqs definitely sound cleaner.
The kick and bass really go together.
like they're making love. I heard someone say once that a good a psytrance bassline is when "the kick and bass are making love with each other"
XD

Well thanks for listening to my advice I know you must be wondering how should I know what I am talking about, when I don't even have any music to show others.
All i can say is that I am listening from a decent pair of monitors that many people in the psytrance scene trust to be accurate.
:)

Anyway, I should have my first track completed in a month if I can just get it together... I actually should have like 4 or 5 but i'm slow and I keep getting distracted and bouncing from one track to the next.